google drive commenting

Author: myogpatterns

articles/patternReview.html

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-                                    For Phase 1, please provide your comments directly in the Instructions PDF file by utilizing the commenting feature. <a href="https://helpx.adobe.com/acrobat/using/commenting-pdfs.html#add_a_sticky_note">Add a Sticky Note</a> to highlight any specific sections or steps where you have observations, suggestions, or feedback. Additionally, feel free to jot down your overall impressions and summarize in your response email.  
+                                    For Phase 1, please provide your comments directly in the Instructions PDF file by utilizing the live commenting feature. If you're unfamiliar with the Google Drive commenting feature, preview the PDF from Google Drive directly (no reason to download a file locally). Highlight any specific sections or steps where you have feedback and a small comment icon appears. Click the icon, type your feedback, and click "Comment" to submit.   
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+                                    Comments can be shown or hidden and comment notifications can be controlled via "More Actions" in your browser. 
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-                                    As you progress through Phase 2, continue providing inline comments directly in the PDF file if you come across specific observations or suggestions during the sewing process. Please highlight any pattern elements that you find noteworthy.
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-                                    Additionally, upon completion, kindly summarize your overall pattern feedback in your response email. Clearly reference the pattern elements you're commenting on for clarity.
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+                                    As you progress through Phase 2, continue providing inline comments directly in the PDF file if you come across specific observations or suggestions during the sewing process. </p>
 
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                                     Lastly, I'd greatly appreciate it if you could capture photos of your sewing progress and your finished project! Your photos and creative approach not only contribute immensely to my understanding of the pattern's performance but also serve as inspiration for others who may undertake similar projects.